Sunday, January 23, 2011

A Really Bad Poem

Lew L. Humiston
Prolegomena to a New Poetics
Winter Quarter
Writing Prompt: A Bad Poem (In Class)


Ode to Virginia



Fawn colored milk

sheds from the bosom of mother earth.

So laments: THE great, soggy, Virginia. Rocks

in her pockets to help shed the weight of literary heaviness.

She has no room of her own—big enough to shelter glass-fragile melancholy.

She’s sinking now—not too quickly…………..not too slowly—just at the right speed

to make her point, before the waters of sorrow ruin a good hair day.

Before Virginia’s bouffant surrenders to the tickle of the Ouse. 

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